Now on to the story!!
Insignificant Other: Part 15
Tatjana, still hanging from the tree a good forty minutes later she heard the discussion fall from its raucous tenor to a hushed whisper. Then Christoph and Paul began to walk toward the house shoving each other in jest as they conversed among themselves. Meister then turned his gaze upon his bound pet and gave her a roguish smile, sat in his chair nonchalantly pulled out a newspaper from his black bag and proceeded to disregard her once again as he began to read.
The first to return was Paul holding what looked to be a wicker picnic basket in one hand and in the other hand two thin metal dog dishes stacked upon each other. Frowning when she saw Paul place to the two bowls on the ground already catching on what they are going to do Tatjana feel her defiant spirit flare up as the degradation that was about to be foisted upon her.
Through narrowed eyes she watched Paul and Meister banter back and forth quietly, snickering at crude remarks. Then Christoph walked up holding some contraption that looked as if it were meant to hold someone in place, Tatjana felt a jolt of anticipation shoot down her spine at what that possibilities that device could bring. The new apparatus was place on the ground not too far from the three seats, and Christoph then joined the other two scheming men to see what the plans were and to inject any ideas of his own.
Feeling a bead of sweat drip down her brow from the aching heat between her thighs, Tatjana knew that her Meister was purposely taking drawing out time so that she would become more scared and aroused as time ticked by. Then Tatjana saw Meister take out a bottle of wine and a decadent looking chocolate cake from the basket and placed it onto the small table that was off to the right of his seat. She then saw Paul pop the cork of the wine bottle and he poured some of the red wine into one of the bowls on the ground and then took a swig of the bottle himself before he sat it back down.
Meister then cut the cake with a knife from the basket and placed a slice on three small plates that also came with the picnic basket. He then cut an fourth slice and placed into the empty dog bowl on the ground and then sauntered over to the trunk of the tree and untied Tatjana’s suspended leg so that she was now stand tip toe on both feet. Discarding the extra rope to the side, Meister then set about unwrapping the remaining rope from around the tree so that Tatjana would be standing normally. Meister then walked over to where his slave was standing and unhooked her from the metal hook that previously suspended her awkwardly.
“On all fours, pet.” Meister commanded. Huffing silently Tatjana dropped to her hands and knees without question. “Toss me the leash Christoph.” She heard Meister say from behind her. Meister then attached the leash to her collar once it was thrown from where Christoph was seated. Nudging her forward with his boot on her bare ass, Meister followed behind Tatjana as she made her way toward where the other men sat. “Stop here, pet.” Meister sounded. Tatjana halted right in front of where the two dog bowls sat with food waiting to be consumed.
“Here’s some cake for you, pet. But the catch is you’ve got to eat it like the bitch you are. Now eat!” Meister ordered. When Tatjana leaned forward, but failed to begin to eat Meister shoved her face into the cake and growled out “Eat!” Pushing back against Meister’s hand trying to avoid getting cake up her nose, she sputtered as she gasped in a breath of air as she began to take bites of the cake. Feeling humiliated Tatjana continued to consume the dessert smearing bits of cake and icing all over her face. “Good girl.” Meister intoned behind her. He then grabbed her by her hair and shoved her face into the bowl containing the wine, laughing as she thrashed causing wine to fly all over the place.
Panting from having wine go up her nose Tatjana let out an impressive growl for someone her size muttered out a quiet “Bastard.” Causing the other men sitting down to laugh, then she felt Meister wrenching her backwards by her hair roughly causing her to squeal in pain. Meister bit out “What the fuck did you say to me bitch?” Putting her nose in the air defiantly and closing her eyes, she ignored her Meister. Meister then laughed a laugh so low and rumbling, Tatjana could feel it vibrate through her body. Meister drew back from her and then kicked her over roughly and then dragged her stunned body through the grass over to the wooden device. “You want to act like a bitch? Well we’re gonna treat you like a bitch. Meet the breeding stand.” Meister snarled out as he held her up by her collar as if she were a disobedient puppy. “Originally it was for guaranteeing that a female dog bred with a selected stud, but now it’s been modified for human bitches that need to be strapped down and used like the sluts they are.” He informed.
Picking her petite form up like it was nothing, Meister placed her hips on to a piece of wood with soft cushioning inside that curved around the hips on each side. He then tightened the straps at the end of each curved piece of wood securing her hips so that she couldn’t escape. Meister then forced Tatjana to rest her neck onto the cushioned curved wood in front of her and strapped her neck in also. Walking around her prone form Meister when over to the small table and picked up the newspaper he had been reading earlier, he then rolled the thick folds of paper up tightly and strolled back over to Tatjana. Looking up at her Meister fiercely, absolutely abhorring at the sticky feel of the cake and wine upon her visage Tatjana’s lip curled in anger.
Grinning ferociously at his pet’s newfound unruliness Meister said in a mocking voice “Aw, how cute the little puppy is trying to bear its fangs. Too bad we have to establish early on that it can’t bite that hand that feeds.” He then smacked the rolled up paper across each side of her face and on her nose repeatedly. Meister then leaned down and yanked her hair cruelly; he then leaned forward and licked up the side of her jawline to her ear moaning in approval when he tasted the sweet mixture of wine and chocolate on her skin. “My puppy has such a filthy little mouth, I think her mouth needs to be filled so we don’t hear her voice polluting the air anymore.” He purred into her ear making her shiver.
Meister then turned to look at Christoph and Paul who were watching the sight keenly. “What do you think guys?” He questioned. “Yeah, I’ve got something stuff her little throat with.” Christoph replied as he stood and walked toward Meister. “I’ve got something to shut her up too.” Paul verbalized sardonically.
Meister then moved out of Christoph’s way and went to stand behind Tatjana’s exposed rear. Christoph took out his straining length from his pants and shoved it into Tatjana’s face, rubbing the tip on her lips. When she just kept looking despondently at the ground her he then slapped his hard cock across her cheek and then pinched her nose closed and waited for her to instinctually take a breath. Losing the battle and needing air badly she opened her mouth to inhale but was stopped by a dick being shoved down her throat.
Crying out in surprise at the insistent member began to move further down her throat, Tatjana tried to relax her throat so she wouldn’t choke as tears welled up in her eyes. “Good girl. Swallow my cock.” Christoph crooned as he thrust his cock down her throat. Standing next to Christoph with his dick out, hard and ready, Paul waited for Christoph to let him shove his own cock down the captive woman’s hot throat. Meister watched rivetedly as the two men shared his little pet’s mouth, focusing intently every time they tried to fit both of their cocks into her mouth making her writhe in her restraints and cry out as they just laughed and attempted again.
Meister began to rub on Tatjana’s neglected pussy and then swirled his finger around her swollen nub. Choking around Paul’s cock, Tatjana let out a satisfied hiss as she felt Meister’s expert fingers manipulating her under stimulated core delightfully. Meister then used his free hand to slap her as causing her to jerk forward in surprise and swallow the cock in her mouth further down her throat. While he still played with her dripping wet pussy, Meister grabbed onto the tail attached to the plug engulfed in her ass and pulled it out so that only the tip was still inside of her. Tatjana moaned around the two cocks that filled the confines of her small mouth earning her a stinging slap across her face. “Remain silent you worthless little cunt.” Christoph sneered as he tried to fit more of his cock down her throat.
Meister wrapped the tail around his fist and then pushed the entire plug back into Tatjana’s ass, enjoying the way her body tensed at being filled again. Tatjana was breathless and gasping from the relentless way that Schneider and Paul were fucking her mouth; her jaw felt like it would break with the next rough thrust. She then felt something thick and insistent prodding at her folds and she recognized it as her Meister’s heavy girth teasing her aching entrance. Meister then pulled the butt plug out again by the tail and then lined his cock up with her pussy and thrust both in at the same time making her let out a strangled moan at being so completely filled.
Tatjana felt another slap across her face, but she didn’t care at all, the sting only adding fuel to the fire between her legs where Meister’s thick cock filled her needy little hole. “Such a tight little bitch.” Meister purred from behind her as he began to drive his hips forward. Tatjana sucked harder on the current cock filling her greedy little mouth as she felt the heady pleasure from Meister’s hard thrusts jolt through her body. Meister then ran his hands along her rib cage teasingly as he thrust evenly within her, feeling her start to tense up at the ticklish sensations. He then began to apply more pressure with his fingertips over her rib cage making her whine out around Paul’s cock, causing the men to laugh at her predicament.
As Meister still pounded away at her sopping wet cunt while he tickled her Tatjana tried to squirm and wriggle in her restraints at the multitude of sensations that were assaulting her body. Seeing that their little fuck toy was beginning to misbehave again, Christoph pulled his cock from Tatjana’s overstuffed mouth and went to go retrieve the thorny branch from earlier. Standing with both legs on either side of her body Christoph watched fixedly as Meister delivered thrust after jarring thrust into Tatjana’s willing body as he tickled her relentlessly. Seeing Tatjana begin to struggle anew, Christoph struck the branch across her still healing back laughing sadistically when he saw spots of blood bubble up from the scars.
Yelping in pain around Paul’s cock, she felt tears prick her eyes as she felt the thorns of the branch tear her flesh as Schneider slammed it upon her abused skin repeatedly. Her vision began to blur at the contrasting feelings, and her mind could no longer think clearly. Paul then thrust deeply in to her exhausted mouth a few more times and then spent his seed on her face, smearing it all over with the head of his cock. Paul laughed at the sulky look that made its way on Tatjana’s soiled countenance as he walked away to sit and recover from the day’s activities.
Still hammering harshly into his pet’s pliable flesh, Meister grabbed onto the plug once more and began to move it within Tatjana at the same pace as thrusting. Moaning heatedly at what her Meister was doing to her body she quickly stopped vocalizing her pleasure when Christoph stepped back in to view; smiling cruelly at her. Tatjana’s face twisted into a scornful look making Christoph laugh mockingly at the sullied woman who still found it in her to be willful when she had no such privileges. Schneider then took the rose branch and drug it roughly along her cheek, chuckling as her eyes scrunched shut in pain. He then pulled the branch back a little and then slashed it across her supple skin taking delight in the thin red welts the thorns left.
Yanking her hair forcefully, Meister said brusquely “Open your disgusting little mouth and suck Christoph’s cock.” With a sneer plastered on her own face Tatjana did not comply, instead she just stared challengingly into Christoph’s piercing blue eyes. Smirking darkly Christoph said to Meister “I don’t think our little toy wants to cooperate.” “Really? Is that true dear pet?” Meister cooed from behind Tatjana. When she didn’t respond Meister leaned over her back and bit her ear hard enough to draw blood making her open her mouth to scream. Christoph shoved his cock into Tatjana’s open mouth, effectively silencing her.
The two men began to simultaneously use their slave’s body for their pleasure, both burying themselves as deep as they could in their respective orifices. Resigning to the fact that she couldn’t ‘fight the power’ Tatjana ceased her defiance for the time being, hoping her acquiescence would at least allow her to cum. Feeling his climax drawing near, Meister let out a guttural moan as he felt his pet’s silky walls fluttering around his throbbing shaft. He then changed the angle of his pounding as he clawed at her sides wildly leaving raised welt marks in his wake.
Eyes rolling in the back of her head at the new angle of penetration she felt, Tatjana tried to hold back her cries of pleasure knowing Christoph would just use the chance to shove his cock further down her already sore throat. Christoph felt his balls tighten signaling his imminent release; he pinched the confined woman’s nose shut reveling in the way she struggled to no avail to try and take a breath. Thrusting harshly a few more times, Schneider pulled his cock from the choking female’s mouth and sprayed his cum about her face, laughing as she growled when some of his sticky cum got into her eyes.
Covered in a sheen of sweat that accentuated his undulating muscles, Meister leaned forward and licked at the droplets of coagulating blood that clung to his pet’s glistening skin. Shivering at the coppery taste of her blood, Meister released a beastly yowl shooting his scalding hot load into Tatjana’s pussy. Meister pulled his cock out of his slave and began to walk toward the house, signaling for the other men to follow him. Regaining her wits upon seeing what was transpiring, Tatjana shouted “H-hey! What about me? You said you’d let me cum!”
Laughing deeply and turning slightly to face her, Meister said “I said if I felt like letting you cum. I made no promises to you, even if I did that doesn’t mean I have to keep them.” He then turned and continued walking back to the house laughing at the long string of obscenities that were expelled from his slave’s mouth.
Author's Comment: So what do you guys think? I think this chapter was so-so since I wrote when I was half sleep, I may revise it at a later date if I feel it's not good enough. Well that's all for now folks! As always your comments are always wonderful as they help me gauge the goodness/crappyness of my writing.
Seems like Meister is dealing with a sub that tops from the bottom.
ReplyDeleteWhat a naughty little pet.
She's a slow learner, isn't she? Well, maybe she just enjoys the lessons too much ;-))
ReplyDelete....Survey says? *DING*!!
ReplyDeleteTo tell the truth, I liked this story at first. I enjoy a dominant Till, but for me to really get turned on, he's got to show instances of kindness in between the punishments, even as he dominates. Right now it just seems he's becoming nastier and nastier to her and there's pretty much no affection. I don't mind a little classic humiliation in a B and D relationship, but now he's just totally degrading her. Also, I just can't picture Schneider and Paul doing those things. You right well, but sorry its just a little too mean spirited for me.
ReplyDelete@Anon: *shrug* That's fine that you don't care for the story, everyone is entitled to their own opinion. BUT you are basing your opinion on something that isn't completed yet. There is a reason for the degradation in the story Tatjana, did something that jepordized the band's career and caused her relationship with Till to become what it is now, but what happened has yet to be revealed. As far as not being able to picture Schneider and Paul doing those things, that may be true in real life but this IS fiction so technically they can do/be however an author decides to write them. PLUS how would any of us know how they really act? They could be very normal and boring or insane, none of us fans know. I purposefully picked those two members FOR the fact that they seem like they wouldn't be involved in such nefarious activities, I simply wanted to do something different. All I can say is that alot of people who don't 'look' like they engage in certain devious activities are actually the main ones that do, look at the murderer Ted Bundy or more recently the 'Craigslist Killer'; no one thought they killed all those girls because he looked 'nice' and 'normal' or even Catholic priests that are supposed to be good and wholsome, but the molest boys AND girls. You should never take things for their face value and that's what I was trying to allude to in the story. And so you don't take this the wrong way I wasn't being condensending at all toward you since I appreciate your criticism. I'm just stating my thoughts in response to yours so no flaming is needed. Thanks for the complement on my writing skills though. :P
ReplyDeleteMaybe if she'd just fuckin' listen for once Meister would ease up on her. In the story it even says she's willfully disobedient.
ReplyDelete^ yeah!!!! exactly! Oh, Behave!
ReplyDeletei have also been wondering what it is that she has done in the past.... I figure it must have been something SO horrible, so wretched to deserve the state of her relationship now.... i'm glad this will be revealed at some point. Keep up the good work. That's some imagination of yours! ;^)
I think he could be a lot meaner. If it were /my/ pet that was acting that way...I'd have a very sorry pet indeed.
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ReplyDeleteWell you did ask for opinions and I'm just giving mine.
ReplyDeleteYes, Ive heard of Ted Bundy...I've heard of Scott Peterson, who was everyone's Golden boy and the perfect husband...so yes, I'm very aware that seemingly nice people can do horrid things, and no one knows what the Rammboys are like in private, but in order to get into a story that is based on real life characters, one has to be able to suspend one's disbelief and I am just not able to that with them in this instance . It not that i think they can't to anything bad, or wicked, Its just that I can't really see the R+ guys in the attitudes, actions, words or mannerisms of these characters.
And Till doesnt really even seem like a master to me at this point. Just a sadistic asshole. A master should be in charge of his own emotions...Till in this story is just a mean, cruel, nasty, degrading jerk...All he does is call her names and beat her...there's gotta be some contrast, some tenderness otherwise its just sadism for sadism's sake. Whatever she did, there's no excuse for what he does. Its not sexy anymore, its just nasty...and she's not a pet, she's a person. In S and M or B and D relationships, even brutal ones, there are safe-words, boundaries. Maybe you might want to start exploring that.
As far as me judging something that isn't complete, well you started with your flashbacks several times, but just cut them short without much of a hint what happened. If you want to draw out the suspense, that's fine, but without some clue about what happened...Till just seems unpleasant and evil and "The Evil German" is a stereotype that I'm not real crazy about.
Maybe this story just isn't for you. There's lots of soft vanilla stories that have the characters professing love and affection at every turn.
ReplyDeleteThis one isn't it.
^ agreed. To each his own. If this is not your cup of tea, Anon, you should probably go back to Pooky stories on rosenrot. Or, you can always write your own!
ReplyDelete...and "sadism for sadism's sake" ? you say that as if there's something wrong with that. lol
@Anon: Yeah I know I asked for people's opinion AND I clearly stated in my first comment that you are entirely entitled to your opinion. I'm not even offended in the least by what you've said. This is not a love story and it's not supposed to be, if that's what you're looking for adultfanfiction.net has a bunch sappy overdone 'happily ever after' stories if that's what you're looking for. BUT as the other two people posted above me, if it's that bad then don't read it. It's as simple as that. When I find something I dislike about a story then I simply clicked the back button and presto! I don't see the shitty story anymore. The End! Problem fixed.
ReplyDeleteLOL its so funny that you think that there are only two the extremes. If you only knew the stories I liked.
ReplyDeleteIf I wanted vanilla, I could read vanilla. I love B and D and S and M. Its funny to me that you asked for criticism and opinion and then when someone gives true criticism, you answer with that tired old "Well if you don't like it, then dont read it!"
If you only wanted to read positive, "OMG, this story is the best" type of comments you should have said that.
Anyway, back to my opinion. I read alot of dark fiction, I've written some myself. I even enjoy rape fantasies. So please don't try to rationalize that if I have a problem with the way your story is going that I must want bland, sappy vanilla stories and that your story is just too hardcore to handle
Again, even in very hard core S and M relationships, there are safe words, the master shows affection at times towards the slave and a good master doesn't spew curse words and names non stop. That means he's not in control of himself. What you are writing isn't particularly original. I've seen many characters written this way, but its not a great way of writing. There's no subtly , no complexity in the character. Till is basically acting like a Nazi...you may as well put him in jackboots and a trenchcoat with a band around his arm.
Its funny to me when people write a one dimensional, mean character and think they're creating a revolution or that they are being so creative or hard core. Its not that hard core or creative to call a woman a bitch, slut or whore...In actuality, its just the flip side of vanilla. I think you can do better than that.
Now you can take my comments and try to dismiss them as someone who just cant "handle" all this heaviness, or you can understand them for what they really are and you can use the criticism constructively and try to grow as a writer.
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ReplyDeleteThe pet does deserve it, because she's not doing what she's been instructed to do. Plain and simple. I'm not going to suck your cock because you feel like doing whatever you want to instead of the rules I've set aside for you. And if she felt the scene was getting out of control, she has every chance to call the scene to an end. But she hasn't.
ReplyDeleteIsn't there a bible study you should be attending at this point?
Your personal attacks are silly and say more about you than me. You don't really understand the B and D scene at all. You simply have an idea of what you think its about. I can tell you're very naive. The Dom/sub life is more than someone constantly beating up on someone. That's just abuse. Any trailer park trash husband can beat the shit out of his wife and call her a slut. The Dom/Sub relationship is more nuanced then that. There are many things Till could do to punish and indicate displeasure. And yes punishment is involved in this lifestyle, but there are rewards for compliance too. Also remember at the end of the day, people have the right to say enough. Even in a total power exchange, it still must be consensual. Otherwise it becomes a crime.
ReplyDeleteYou and the writer of this story seem to think that the B and D life style just means brutality and nastiness and that anything that's not over the top cruel is somehow vanilla and that cruelty for cruelty's sake is "totally hardcore." Its not...really.
You just give me a minute and I'll give you the proper reply you're looking for.
ReplyDeleteIf I'm naive, you're a know it all cunt.
More name calling LOL. Again, it just proves that you don't have the critical thinking skills to formulate an intelligent reply. Know it all? No. Know more than you? Oh yes.
ReplyDeleteYou can't debate, you can't discuss, so you reach for the curse words like a child having a tantrum.
Pathetic child.
I could call you names too. But its beneath me, because I'm intelligent and articulate, something you only wish you could be.
IF you actually read what I had posted, I said I'm working on a retort.
ReplyDeleteYour personal attacks are silly and say more about you than me.
ReplyDelete- Sucks to be me, doesn’t it?
You don't really understand the B and D scene at all.
- What’s it like in that Ivory tower of yours? I do have real BDSM experience outside of the computer. I served a Master.
You simply have an idea of what you think it’s about.
- Or I’m indulging in fantasy.
I can tell you're very naive.
- I can tell you’re a bitch. So what would be your point?
The Dom/sub life is more than someone constantly beating up on someone.
- Fair enough, but there’s much more to the BDSM life style than whipping and pain. Psychological degradation, emotional play, etc., etc.
That's just abuse.
- Is it really abuse if it’s between two consenting adults of sound mind?
Any trailer park trash husband can beat the shit out of his wife and call her a slut.
- Yes. He can. Is he calling it S/m? Or is it just plain spousal abuse? Is she getting anything from it? I guess what I’m getting at there is, what’s your point here? Are you playing up the emotional card?
The Dom/Sub relationship is more nuanced then that.
- As long as they have their appropriate titles everything is kosher? Makes sense to me!
There are many things Till could do to punish and indicate displeasure.
- I’d be interested in knowing what that is.
And yes punishment is involved in this lifestyle, but there are rewards for compliance too.
- What compliance?! There has been little to no compliance in this story from the first chapter.
Also remember at the end of the day, people have the right to say enough.
- Absolutely. SSC (Safe, sane and consensual) is one of the building blocks of an S/m relationship. But she hasn’t said it yet, so is she really being taken advantage of and abused knowing she has all rights to make it stop?
Even in a total power exchange, it still must be consensual. Otherwise it becomes a crime.
-See above answer.
You and the writer of this story seem to think that the B and D life style just means brutality and nastiness and that anything that's not over the top cruel is somehow vanilla and that cruelty for cruelty's sake is "totally hardcore."
- To each their own. Do like the thought of my pet being degraded and humiliated? Of course I do. Would I punish her if she said anything otherwise? Fucking right I would. She knows her place and so do I. And she’s thankful for it.
It’s not...really.
- Thanks. I’m so much more enriched now.
*pokes* So when are you gonna post another installment? The suspense is killing me!
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